Literacy

Type in the cont I am reading at a 10 to 11 year old level.
 * My Reading Goal for 2010 **

I am very pleased to be at this level because it is over my actual age.

By the end of 2010 I would like to be reading at a 11 to 12 year old level.

To achieve this I need to: Choos books to read wheth out Mrs Couper saying '' Tayla go get a book to read at home. ent of your page here.

9/2/10

In my first week at school I wrote a story about riding at the rodeo. The things i did well were To improve I need to
 * plot because there was an bad problem
 * intresting starting
 * intresting finishing
 * Not use talking so much in my story
 * need to put more adjectives in my story

15/3/10

I wrote a story about a girl riding a horse in a race The things I did well was adding more interesting detail. I added more information. I liked my ending because it ended up having a little twist at the end. The second person was someone she knew and so it became the "best day ever" again which linked with the start of the story. The thing I need to improve on is spelling and more interesting verbs. Also more adverbs would make my story better. I need to put more information about the character and the plot. I think my work is about L4

5/5/10 Report Writing

I wrote a report about pet pests

The things I did well were The thing I need to improve on next time when I write a report is I need to explain a bit more at the introduction so people can know what the report is about.
 * Adding info is another one becuase it is intresting to now that your pets are a pest to our native anamels.
 * I explained one of my ides well so that others would understand too.